Написать эссе на английском языке – это задача не из легких. Оно должно быть ограничено в количестве символов, выражать только мысли автора, иметь логические связки и обладать аргументами. Слишком много требований предъявляют к этому заданию. Учтите рекомендации, чтобы писать эссе правильно.
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Не могли бы вы проверить моё эссе по английскому языку на тему воровства в школе и исключения(что я по поводу этого думаю)
There is no doubt that larceny at school should be punished.
The exception of the pupil of school serves as punishment.
On the one hand, if the pupil steals money or other important thing, it is expelled from by school.
On the other hand, I think, if the pupil has stolen less important thing, for example the handle it shouldn’t punish. Because it not a crime.
In the conclusion, I think that the exception of school should be only for very bad acts.
Здравствуйте, Алена.
— The exception of the pupil of school serves as punishment. — речь идет об исключении из школы? Дайте русский вариант того, что вы хотите сказать.
— he/she is expelled from school.
— if the pupil has stolen less important thing, for example the handle it shouldn’t punish. Because it not a crime. — дайте русский вариант. Это не преступление — It’s not a crime.
— I would like to add that…pupils should be expelled from school only for serious wrong-doings.
Большое спасибо, Виктория! Вы спасли мне жизнь) + Вы золото, не сомневайтесь)
пожалуйста напишите мне эссе на 220 слов плюсы и минусы больших тц
на англиском плиз
Толковый гайдик, спасибо
Здравствуйте, Антон. Спасибо, что оставили свое мнение о статье.
Большое спасибо за статью! очень пригодилась!
Здравствуйте, Дана. Благодарим за ваш отзыв.
Здравствуйте! Напишите пожалуста эссе на тему: «Каким должен быть президент?»
заранее огромное спасибо!)
04en’ pomogaet! pasib!
СОБОР СВЯТОГО ПАВЛА
Это – шедевр, созданный Сэром Кристофером Врен. Он возвышается на том же самом месте, где ранее находились другие храмы, причём последний храм был разрушен Великим Пожаром Лондона в 1666 году. Строительство настоящего здания Собора началось в 1675 году, а последний его камень был положен в
1710 году.
Согласно точки зрения многих специалистов, данный собой представляет собой одно из самых восхитительных зданий эпохи Возрождения во всём мире.
Здесь надо отметить, что по размеру купола, Собор Святого Павла превосходит только купол Собора Святого Петра в Риме.
Внутренний купол собора украшают росписи Сэра Джеймса Торнхиль, которые отражают жизнь Святого Павла, а над ними находятся внешние своды, которые превышают по своему размеру внутренний купол, они выполнены из дерева со свинцовым покрытием. Обычно посетителям советуют подняться на
Галерею Вздохов, для того, чтобы испытать то акустическое явление, которое дало название самой галерее, откуда они проходят во внешнюю галерею, которая носит название Каменной Галереи, где открывается вид на весь необъятный Лондон. Самые отважные могут продолжить подъём до Золотой
Галереи и, наконец, войти в Золотой Шар, на котором возвышается позолоченный крест, который доминирует весь Сити.
В восхитительном внутреннем убранстве Собора представлены знаменитые картины, скульптуры и художественные произведения, среди которых надо выделить скамьи на горах, которые вырезаны из дерева современником Врена,
Гринлингом Джиббонс; решётку перед входной дверью, выполненную из кованого железа – это произведение выполнено Тижоу, ещё одним современником; новый главный алтарь, сделанный по проекту Врена и посвящённый войскам
Сообщества, которые погибли в годы Второй Мировой Войны, а также
Американскую Мемориальную Часовню, в апсиде за алтарём. Другой деталью, которая чудом уцелела во время Великого Пожара, является несколько мрачноватая статуя поэта Джона Доннэ. Также здесь хранится копия знаменитой картины Холмана Ханта «Свет мира», а также памятники таким известным художникам, как Тёрнер, Рейнольдс, Ван Дейк, Милле. Останки Лорда Нельсона покоятся в склепе, выполненном из чёрного мрамора, который был создан вначале для Генриха VIII, в то время, как останки гениального архитектора покоятся в склепе с простой надписью «Si Monumentum requiris circumspice»
(«Если ищешь монументы – посмотри вокруг»).
Здравствуйте, Ангелина. Мы не переводим тексты и не пишем сочинений. Мы проверяем вашу работу. Все это обозначено в правилах комментирования в блоге. А вот материал о современном Лондоне можно найти вот в этих книгах:
— http://englishtips.org/1150854800-london-the-biography.html
— http://englishtips.org/1150854696-rt-discovery-london-step-1.html
— http://englishtips.org/1150852072-frommers-london-2011.html
— http://englishtips.org/1150832980-london-from-the-walled-city-to-new-towns.html
— http://englishtips.org/1150830656-london-blooms-literary-places.html
— http://englishtips.org/1150812179-lonely-planet-london-city-guide.html
— http://englishtips.org/1150793537-london__penguin_readers_level_2_600_word.html
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помогите перевести пожалуйста((
а в вашей библиотеке нету доклада на тему: современный лондон. ПОМОГИТЕ НАЙТИ, вы меня очень выручили бы! заранее большое спасибо!
Помогите пожалуйста, я очень затрудняюсь перевести следующую фразу:
So I sort of thought it would apply, and be cool, to have it be this dream that you’re trapped in.
Как это правильнее перевести?
Здравствуйте, Катя. Без соответствующего контекста трудно переводить какие-либо выражения. Можно увидеть контекст?
Вот:
[It's about] this girl, and everything that she would draw would come to life in her dreams, and she was creating this dream world for herself. And at first, it was cool, but then it’s like this nightmare,» she explained. «So I sort of thought it would apply, and be cool, to have it be this dream that you’re trapped in. So you’re in a place that, at first, is a magical world, but at the same time, you’re isolated and trapped there, and that’s the reason you want to come back to reality after a time.»
Most people would agree that computers have
made our lives much easier, especially in
schools. However, some people feel that they
can be a distraction in schools. Certainly,
there are arguments for both sides.
There are many points in favour of computers
in schools. Firstly, they improve students’ ICT
skills. In fact, they are essential for this
subject. Secondly, they can be used in music
and language classes to great effect. For
example, to mix music or to play a foreign
language CD-ROM. Furthermore, the Internet
is a very useful research tool for all subjects.
On the other hand, there are some arguments
against computers in schools. To start with, some
students may use the Internet for purposes other
than research. For example, to go to chatrooms
or send personal emails. Secondly, students may
use the computers to play video games or to
download inappropriate material.
All in all, although there are some negative
aspects to having computers in schools, overall
they are extremely useful and beneficial. With
the right safeguards in place and with adult
supervision I believe computers are an essential
educational tool.
Здравствуйте, Иван. Я бы дополнила так:
— some people think that computers can be…
— arguments for and against
— to great effect. — что имели ввиду?
— for other purposes, not for research
— aspects of
подскажите тему ессе английский
Здравствуйте, Галина. Эссе может быть на любую тему, которую вы хотели бы раскрыть.
Не могли бы вы проверить моё эссе по английскому языку на тему
It’s a good idea for a child to take care of pets from an early age!
Many young children are asking parents to give them, in any holiday: cat, dog, hamster, etc.
But parents should think about whether to buy a baby pet. And if so, what!
There are many opinions on this subject: 1) to five years can not, 2) but only a few species, 3) can the child be hardworking and responsible …
Personally, I think that in the house with small children should be pets. They satisfy their cognitive interest, help them grow sensitive, kind people. But if parents are afraid of any infection, we must show animal veterinarian before you bring it in house.
Виктория спасите!!!! Горю!!!!
Здравствуйте , помогите написать эссе на 120 слов на тему «Следует ли изучать в школе иностраный язык»
Добрый день, Бела! Согласно правилам нашего сайта, мы убедительно просим Вас написать эссе самостоятельно, а потом прислать его нам, а мы подкорректируем ошибки в нем. Это будет гораздо полезнее для Вас.
Здраствуйте, Не могли бы вы проверить моё эссе по английскому языку на тему
My favorite sport and my favorite sportsmen.
Many people love watching and participating in sporting events. Franklin D. Roosevelt, the 32nd U.S. president once said, «Sports is the very fiber for what we all stand for. It keeps our spirit alive.»
I like sport. I like tennis, swimming, figure skating, football, valley-ball. But my favorite sport is football- the most popular sport in the world, is well known as “ King” sport. I like this game because it is exciting and challenging.
Football is a team sport played between two teams of eleven players each. It is a ball game played on a rectangular grass field with a goal post at each end. The objective of the game is to score by maneuvering the ball into the opposing team’s goal. The winner is the team which has scored the most goals at the end of the match.
Football is a very exciting game. Football is played at a professional level all over the world. Millions of people regularly go to football stadiums to follow their favorite team, whilst millions more avidly watch the game on television. A very large number of people also play football at an amateur level. In many parts of the world, football evokes great passions and plays an important role in the life of individual fans, local communities, and even nations; it is therefore often claimed to be the most popular sport in the world. There are many worldwide international football competitions. One of these is the World Cup organized by Fédération Internationale de Football Association. Over 190 national teams compete in qualifying tournaments within the scope of continental confederations for a place in the finals. The finals tournament, which is held every four years, now involves 32 national teams competing.
Football is a very unpredictable game, because there is many factors affecting the outcome of the game. People can predict the talent of teams, but not their dedication or mental toughness. A team can win big one week and the next week play as if it is their first time playing the game. That is what makes football exciting and fun to follow.
There are many popular football-players, for example: Paolo Maldini, Pirlo — they are playing in Milan; Konovaro is playing in Parma; Nesto is playing in Lazio; Baggio is playing in Breshia; Totti, Toldo, Ronaldo, Vieri are playing in Inter.
The football star I admired most is Messi. He’s Argentinean, but from twelve years old he is playing in Football Club Barcelona.
Messi received Ballon d’Or and FIFA World Player of the Year nominations by the age of 21, and won in 2009, 2010 and 2011. He also won the 2010–11 UEFA Best Player in Europe Award. His playing style and small stature has drawn comparisons to Diego Maradona, who himself declared Messi as his «successor.»
Messi began playing football at a young age and his skill and potential was soon realized by Barcelona. Major honours soon followed as Barcelona won La Liga in Messi’s debut season. Messi then had the most successful season of his playing career, the 2008–09 season, in which he scored 38 goals to play an integral part in a treble-winning campaign. This record-breaking season was then eclipsed in the following 2009–10 campaign, where Messi scored 47 goals in all competitions, equalling Ronaldo’s record total for Barcelona. He surpassed this record again in the 2010–11 season with 53 goals in all competitions. At international level Messi scored 19 goals in 66 games.
Messi also proved the «new Maradona» tag was not all hype, by nearly replicating Maradona’s most famous goals in the space of the single season. On 18 April 2007, he scored two goals during a Copa del Rey semi-final against Getafe CF, one of which was very similar to Maradona’s famous goal against England at the 1986 World Cup in Mexico, known as the Goal of the Century. The world’s sports press drew comparisons with Maradona, and the Spanish press labelled Messi as «Messidona». He ran about the same distance, 62 metres, beat the same number of players, scored from a very similar position, and ran towards the corner flag just as Maradona did in Mexico 21 years before.
In 2007, Messi established the Leo Messi Foundation, a charity supporting access to education and health care for vulnerable children. In response to Messi’s own childhood medical difficulties, the Leo Messi Foundation has offered Argentine children diagnosed with illnesses treatment in Spain and funds covering the transport, hospital and recuperation costs.
In March 2010, France Football ranked him at the top of its list of the world’s richest footballers, with £29.6 million in combined income from salaries, bonuses and off-field earnings.
I wish him good luck in World Cup 2012!
Почему не проверяйте мое эссе
Добрый день, Алекс! Ошибок в вашем эссе почти нет.
1) Football is a very unpredictable game, because there are many factors…
2) But my favorite sport is football — the most popular sport in the world, is well known as.. Я бы здесь написала так: But my favorite sport is football — the most popular sport in the world. It is well known as…
Однако ваше эссе больше похоже на сочинение. В эссе должна быть четкая структура: вступление, основная часть и заключение. У вас есть небольшое вступление, но непонятно, зачем вы даете цитату. Мысль обрывается. Цитату нужно обосновать, доказать, что «It keeps our spirit alive». Заключения у вас также нет. Нужно сделать вывод, который должен подтверждать мысль, высказанную во вступлении.
Еще один момент. Между параграфами должны быть linking phrases, которых у вас нет. Создается впечатление, что вы просто вставили отдельные кусочки текстов. Три параграфа начинаются словом Football и еще три словом Messi.
Не обижайтесь, но это не эссе. Информация здесь неплохая, но ее нужно оформить в эссе. Посмотрите еще раз требования к написанию.
если не сложно, проверьте пожалуйста мое эссе. на тему :
Some people think that to be a success you need talent, others believe that hard work can compensate for the lack of it.
To begin with, nowadays people spend lots of time studying foreign languages or to improve their language skills. Besides, many people believe that it is necessary to get higher education in order to be an intelligent man or to earn much money. Talented people are easier to lean than others people.
On the one hand, many people believe that education is a main part our life. In the modern world you should to be attractive, well-dressed, of course, intelligent and well-educated man. Nevertheless, some people think that to be a success you need talent. For example, politicians are talented people. They are obtain education, qualifications, and, of course, good job.
On the other hand, many people believe that hard work can compensate for talent. I want to agree with this statement. Hardworking people learn and work more than other people. They want to get education and excellent work despite the difficulties. In addition, such people more strong and determined. They to know that they want.
To conclude, I want to say , many people should gain their aim, because everybody man wants to be an useful for own family or society. Achieve the goal is the best dream of life.
Здравствуйте, Юлия!
Вот некоторые исправления к Вашему сочинению
- … or improving their language skills.
- … an intelligent person or to earn much money.
- Talented people learn more easily than other people
- In the modern world you should be … well-educated people
- … that to be successful you need talent
- They obtain education, qualifications and of course a good job
- In addition, such people are more strong and determined
- They know that they want
- … people should reach their aim, because everybody wants to be useful for own family or society
- Achieving the goal
большое спасибо!! я сдаю егэ, поэтому набираю навыки написания. можете проверить еще одно?
тема :
Some of my friends think it’s important to do sports regularly while others would rather watch a sporting event on TV.
To begin with, I think the best way of keeping fit is doing sports. Sport is one of those things that make our lives really interesting. However, some people believe that better watch a sporting event on TV, than to do sports regularly.
On the one hand, sports help us to stay healthy , beautiful and attractive. Sport is the best way to get an joyful emotions. In addition, sport help us to overcome difficulties and gives a chance to acquire self-confidence. What is more, sports makes us more organized and better disciplined in our daily activities. It is also a good way to spend free time and to make friends.
On the other hand, we must admit that sport takes a lot of energy and time and it can be really exhausting. Some sports can be rather dangerous. As a result, people often have serous injuries. Moreover, sports makes you unhappy when you lose, which can lead to psychological problems.
To conclude, I want to say, that it’s important to do sports regularly. I can not agree that it is better to watch a sporting event on TV, because it is not useful for people. You should to do sports for pleasure and to stay in good shape or to relax.
Здравствуйте, Юлия! Вот то, что требует корректировки:
-…people believe that it’s better to watch…than to do
— …sport helps us
— to get emotions (without article)
— sport helps us
— sport makes us
— sport makes you unhappy
— …and this can lead to…
— you should do and stay…or just relax (without to)
essay^
Some of my friend say there’s nothing better than reading a good book while others would rather watch its film version.
Some people prefer to read books than to watch different films. Others people like to watch films and to listening music. However, it is problem. People should to read book in order to expand your outlook. But will films be able to replace books?
From my point of view, reading is the most interesting and useful leisure for any man. Books are force everyone people to think about his future, global problems, love experiences and thought famous people. More than that, a printed books is better for human eyes than a computer screen.
On the other hand, nowadays people are used to want make life easier. Modern condition allow us to find quickly the necessary information through the Internet and other sources. However, some people have second opinion, because they don’t like to read. Many people prefer to watch film, because it is more interesting. Besides, books are very expensive and inconvenient for their of transportation.
To sum up, I think films and printed books will peacefully coexist for many years. More than that, I want to say that all people should to read books and watch to different films. Watching films and reading books are very useful and entertaining for any man.
Добрый день, Юлия! Кое что нужно исправить:
- Some people prefer reading books to watching different films.
- Other people like watching films and listening to music.
- However, it is a problem.
- People should read books in order to broaden the mind.
- Books make all people think about their future, global problems, love experiences and famous people.
- … a printed book is better for human eyes than a computer screen.
- … nowadays people tend to use things that make their life easier.
- Modern conditions allow …
- However, some people have another point of view…
- …don’t like reading
- …inconvenient to carry.
- … all people should read books and watch different films
Здравствуйте! Проверьте, пожалуйста, моё эссе на тему «Is reading are good or bad?»
There are so many differents views about reading: somebody said that books make a people litirature, other said that reading it was boring, it waste of time. Nowadays it’s almost impossible to imagine our life without books. Perhaps, there are more books on our planet than men alive. I have always woundered is reading books are good or bad? In my opinion reading should be good, isn’t it?
From my view point, if a person with a childhood familiar with the reading , then from him get a decent person. Such people have a rich vocabulary,works good fantasy. Reading is a special world full of adventures and joy.The person receives a lot of impressions from reading. From educational view point of book friend and adviser. In schools a lot of oral subjects. There are very interesting!
I can make a conclusion that reading is good. this is a wonderful pastime and the cognition of something new.
Добрый день, Елизавета! Обратите внимание на исправления:
Во-первых, ошибка в самой теме эссе «Is reading are good or bad?». Нужно: «Is reading good or bad?»
Далее по тексту:
There are so many different views on reading: some people say that books make us literate, others say that reading is boring, it’s a waste of time. Nowadays it’s almost impossible to imagine our life without books. Perhaps, there are more books on our planet than men alive. I have always wondered whether reading of books is good or bad? In my opinion, reading is good, isn’t it?
From my point of view, if a person has been familiar with reading since childhood, he will become a decent person. Such people have rich vocabulary and good imagination. Reading is a special world full of adventures and joy. Any person gets a lot of impressions from reading. From educational point of view, book is a friend and adviser. There are a lot of oral subjects at school. (Что вы имеете в виду под «oral subjects»?? Может быть: There are a lot of subjects at school that require reading) They are very interesting!
I can make a conclusion that reading is good. You have a good time and get to know something new.
Большое спасибо, Оксана! Я только учусь писать эссе)